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Re: A nice joke speech!
Hey manager! Nice speech! You really should write comedy strips, lots of people will be in tears and stitches. Though I must admit, I was a bit dissapointed. Your title ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: caffeinated
Hey you! Rather unique poetry, quite dramatic I must say :)!!! I agree with you about what you said about your Title maybe something like 'Addicted to her' or 'Intoxicated' ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Where you're meant to be
Hi y'all. Happy new year!!! I've never done poetry before always shied away from it but its a new year and the truth is it just came to me... I ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Passion over Power part 1
Hi ya, Nice story. Trust me, you don't need to make any excuses for the romantic part of the story, the undertones are quite noticeable besides your just beginning right? ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Road Block
Thank you very much everyone especially Ella(wanted to PM you but didnt find the link). A problem shared is definitely a problem half solved. And maybe I'll make Road Block ...
Oct 30, 2009 -
Re: Road Block
Before I start writing, I just want you to know that I'm just sharing what is a very honest problem. If your commenting on or reviewing this, it's most likely ...
Oct 29, 2009 -
Re: My true friend(WARNING: you may cry.......)
Before I read this I read the comments and it was like everyone was just getting vicious. Chill out!!!...seriously :) Besides its people that write Hallmark cards anyways so its ...
Oct 29, 2009 -
Re: an amazing burthday
Hi Sana! Welcome to YWS!!! I noticed your new here, so I decided to review your work :). Here goes... First of all, your title is a representative of your ...
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: 17 minutes
Hi Lia, really nice work. Since you decided to try writing short stories, I hope you continue. Your writing holds so much substance, its amazing to think of what you'll ...
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: I Miss you
Hey! Welcome to YWS. Also congratulations on being the first writer on YWS :) to make me cry. Your writing blew me away. It wasn't just a good read, it ...
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: Greensleeves
"Applause" (I actually clapped!!!) If you don't win this thing, the judges are mad!!! I absolutely loved reading this. I'm totally inspired to go and write something really amazing. My ...
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: Water and Glass
First of all, if anyone says great writers can only write one kind of thing, its a hot lie!!! For your first poem, you did better than awesome. I don't ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Flight
I think you have fabulous talent so if you had any doubts, by all means knock them out. Your work is great, rough on the edges but great. It was ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Suddenly...
I spent today looking at others people work, learning, reviewing and giving my opinions. I wasn't sure I was going to do any writing today, then after arguing with myself, ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Always High Standards
Will you please write a novel and let me know when its out so I can get it and make it a part of my collection? :D Your writing is ...
Oct 24, 2009
